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Thomas Stearns Eliot (1888-1965)

Sweeney Erect


And the trees about me,
Let them be dry and leafless; let the rocks
Groan with continual surges; and behind me,
Make all a desolation.  Look, look, wenches!

              1Paint me a cavernous waste shore
              2      Cast in the unstilled Cyclades,
              3Paint me the bold anfractuous rocks
              4      Faced by the snarled and yelping seas.

              5Display me Aeolus above
              6      Reviewing the insurgent gales
              7Which tangle Ariadne's hair
              8      And swell with haste the perjured sails.

              9Morning stirs the feet and hands
            10    (Nausicaa and Polypheme),
            11Gesture of orang-outang
            12    Rises from the sheets in steam.

            13This withered root of knots of hair
            14    Slitted below and gashed with eyes,
            15This oval O cropped out with teeth:
            16    The sickle motion from the thighs

            17Jackknifes upward at the knees
            18    Then straightens out from heel to hip
            19Pushing the framework of the bed
            20    And clawing at the pillow slip.

            21Sweeney addressed full length to shave
            22    Broadbottomed, pink from nape to base,
            23Knows the female temperament
            24    And wipes the suds around his face.

            25(The lengthened shadow of a man
            26    Is history, said Emerson
            27Who had not seen the silhouette
            28    Of Sweeney straddled in the sun).

            29Tests the razor on his leg
            30    Waiting until the shriek subsides.
            31The epileptic on the bed
            32    Curves backward, clutching at her sides.

            33The ladies of the corridor
            34    Find themselves involved, disgraced,
            35Call witness to their principles
            36    And deprecate the lack of taste

            37Observing that hysteria
            38    Might easily be misunderstood;
            39Mrs. Turner intimates
            40    It does the house no sort of good.

            41But Doris, towelled from the bath,
            42    Enters padding on broad feet,
            43Bringing sal volatile
            44    And a glass of brandy neat.

Notes

1] The epigraph is Aspatia's directions to the tapestry-makers in The Maid's Tragedy by Francis Beaumont and John Fletcher: she tells them to depict the tale of Ariadne, like herself someone who has lost a love, with a barrenness that reflects how she feels.

2] unstilled Cyclades: Greek islands in the Aegean Sea that in legend are floating.

3] anfractuous: tortuously broken.

5] Aeolus: god of the winds in Greek mythology.

6] Reviewing: viewing again, perhaps viewing as turning around to one's backside.

7] Ariadne: this daughter of Minos, king of Crete, gave Theseus the thread by which he escaped from the Minotaur's labyrinth. Afterwards, Theseus married and then abandoned her on Naxos, where she hanged herself. On his return to Athens, Theseus forgot to change the colour of his sails from black -- which was supposed to signify his defeat -- as a result of which his father the king, fearing the worst from sails that in effect lied, also committed suicide.

10] Nausicaa: Homer's Odyssey tells how the daughter of the king of King Alcinous brought naked, shipwrecked Odysseus back to the safety of her court on Scheria. Polypheme: chief of the man-eating cyclops, blinded by Odysseus and his ship-mates so that they could escape from his hands.

11] orang-outang: Edgar Allan Poe's short story, "The Murders in the Rue Morgue," associates its murders with an orang-outang's lathering and shaving by means of his owner's razor.

26] The essay "Self-Reliance," by Ralph Waldo Emerson (1803-82), states that "An institution is the lengthened shadow of one man .... and all history resolves itself very easily into the biography of a few stout and earnest persons" (Selections from Ralph Waldo Emerson, ed. Stephen E. Whicher [Boston: Houghton Mifflin, 1957]: 154-55).

39] Mrs. Turner: the keeper of a bawdy house.

43] sal volatile: smelling salts, used to awaken someone from a faint.

44] neat: served without water or another mixer.


Online text copyright © 2009, Ian Lancashire (the Department of English) and the University of Toronto.
© T.S. Eliot and Faber and Faber Ltd 1974
Published by the Web Development Group, Information Technology Services, University of Toronto Libraries.

Original text: T. S. Eliot, Poems (New York: Alfred A. Knopf, 1920): 19-21. E546 A753 1920a Fisher Rare Book Library.
First publication date: 1919
Publication date note: First published in Art and Letters 2.3 (Summer 1919). In England published in an almost identical book, Ara Vos Prec (London: Ovid Press, [1920]). Donald Gallup, T. S. Eliot: A Bibliography (London: Faber and Faber, 1969): A4b, C81.
RPO poem editor: Ian Lancashire
RP edition: RPO 1998.
Recent editing: 1:2002/6/1

Composition date: 1917 - 1919
Rhyme: abcb


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